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[Generic Bullet Hell DEMO]

It's a demo, and for now it's too simple, it should have something else, like dodge things or having to aim with the gun, bosses maybe? something to make it more fun to play.

(I don't know if your intention was to make a bullet hell game, because this isn't one, if your intention was to make one, then it should have slighlty slower obstacles and more faster movement, look for examples of some of this genre. If your intention wasn't to make a bullet hell, then these tips in parentheses are useless)

JesseFards responds:

Ok, I take constructive critisism cool. I'll add that in the full release.

[Coolman DEMO]

It has so much charm, and the music is so good. The cutscenes at the beginning might need a bit of work, but it's ok. It's a very good game.

Pciphidic responds:

thanks! glad you liked it

[VIOLA Tech Demo]

This game is pretty interesting, i like the concept. Maybe you should add music and sound effects, but i think you already thought about it.
I hope you finish it, i would like to play it once it's finished.

DFlimbingo responds:

Thank you for the review!! I'm still looking for a musician for the music/sfx.

[Friday Scratch Beats]

For now, it doesn't look too bad, it can be a good start.
I think that you could enlarge the logo at the title screen, the Story Mode and Options buttons could slide when you select them (but maybe you already thought about this), and you could change some colors, most of them are very saturated, like the sky or the pink window.
The animation is good, maybe the art isn't the best, but the animation looks very smooth, you did a great job with the movement and exaggeration, well done.

leathecoolperson responds:

thanks plus because the art looks bad because im too lazy to make it like the style, so i just left it like that until i come back to it and fix the art by its self, but its okay

[The Call: Bad ending]

Well, this isn't a game, but as an animation is very good. The movements and expressions are very well done, great job.

leathecoolperson responds:

yea it was meant for a fnf full week but i changed my mind

[Pico's School Fangame Inspiration]

I can't say anything about this, it doesn't seem to be finished, but it's a start, i can see something good coming out of this. The only problem that i see is that everything looks pixelated, with smoother lines it could look good.

YesssssImgood responds:

Yeah, I was going to finish it but I got lazy so I uploaded it to see anyone reaction but I will finish it soon or later the game is pixels because I retextured and drew most of the textures in scratch lmao that's one of the main reasons and plus I'm not very good at this, haha, But thanks I will try to improve the lines and other stuff.

[Modern: :Combat]

I didn't like this visuals very much, everything looks pixelated, but as a game, it has a very good concept, it's so cool to parry attacks. It was a short game, but it was fun to play.

Maso25 responds:

im not very god at art so i used that to my advantage to make a more stylized game

[Here we go again]

The first level is fine, some simple platforming to start, but the second feels a bit unfair, especially on hard difficulty, here the enemies act now as platforms and i don't see it necessary, since if you manage to get to a high part and one of those enemies hits you, you have no way to get back where you were. The controls can feel a bit uncomfortable, it makes you walk more than you should.
Something i found cool was that wall jump that you can do in the secret area in the first level, i couldn't do that on the rest of the game (except for a part where there was a box), maybe you could implement that move on the main moveset, it could offer many possibilites for level design.
Overall, it's not a bad game, it just needs a little bit of work on the last levels, they need a more interesting level design.

Propelar responds:

Thank you for the suggestions!
I was thinking of adding different graphics on walls you can cling onto, just to make it more user friendly. I'm still working on my level design skills so expect some improvements on future projects :D

[Destroyer Dave]

The game is too simple, there is no platforming or anything, is just walking, shooting and the occasional jump, there is no challenge. Having to walk all the time feels very uncomfortable. Maybe with some platforms or enemies shooting things the game would feel more alive.
I like the simple visuals, and the sprites are well animated.
I think a game like this can work if you refine it more.

Mechawolf77 responds:

thanks for the feedback Tout! I enjoy having detailed player feedback. i barely had up to 48 hours to complete the game so i am sorry that it may feel too simple. i may update the game soon but if not i will note this information for the next game i create. again tysm.